It's time for Spooktoberfest!!! Dani and I have been so excited for this!
Requirements:
1. Your Flash Fiction piece cannot be any longer than 300 words. Sorry… that’s part of the challenge. It can be scary, comical, romantic, whatever you choose. Just be creative!
2. You must use the MANDATORY 5 words listed below:
cobweb(s)
cauldron(s)
ghost(s)
razor(s)
3. Post your Flash Fiction piece any day from Friday Oct. 26 - Monday, Oct. 29th.
4. Follow Dani and myself if you don’t already. We will follow back. And if we miss it, let us know so we can follow you.
5. It’s a blog hop, so hop around to other participating blogs and leave some awesome comments.
6. Have fun!
5. It’s a blog hop, so hop around to other participating blogs and leave some awesome comments.
6. Have fun!
Dani and I will each choose a winner and post them on HALLOWEEN, Wednesday, Oct. 31st.
PRIZES: The winners will get the biggest bags we can find of their favorite candy along with some fun items.
Not required but it'd make us smile... if you have a twitter and have extra time, it'd be cool if you sent us a tweet that you've posted your submission.
Our accounts and hashtag:
@Danibertrand
@JackieFel
#Spooktoberfest
Sweet Kiss
Screams
and eerie music bounce off the walls as Ben and I enter the town’s
annual Haunted
Cave. Flickering lights
from inside the jack-o-lanterns line
the floor and cast dancing shadows around the space.
“Ethan
told me it’s not so bad,” Ben says, taking my hand in his.
I
shiver, but I’m not sure if it’s because of his touch or the
creepiness of this place.
“Are
you scared, Ash?”
“A
little.” I stare at a cauldron bubbling
over with smoke and green goo.
He
wraps his arm around my waist. “I won’t let anything happen to
you.”
White
sheets dangle from the ceiling like laundry set out to dry. In one
swift move, the makeshift ghosts fly
toward us. I jump and dig my fingernails into Ben’s arm.
He
lets out a light laugh and tugs me closer to him. His arms become my
safety net as we make our way through the hellish maze of creepy
zombies, headless bodies, and mask-wearing creepers.
An
amputated hand points us to an arched doorway covered in cobwebs.
We walk through and brush them off. I smile, thankful the exit sign
is just a few feet away.
Ben
pulls me to his chest. “That wasn’t so bad, was it?”
“I
guess not.” I shrug.
“I
told you I wouldn’t let anything happen to you.” He tilts my head
and runs a finger down the vein bulging in my neck. “But I’ll
need to break that promise now.”
Ben
puts his lips to my throat, caressing my skin with his tongue. His
teeth sink in, and I cry out. My neck stings like I’m being cut
with a razor.
Blood drips from the wound, and I melt into him as memories of my
life fade away.
Ooh creepy stuff! I am on a bit of a vampire kick at the moment, so I really enjoyed this!
ReplyDeleteAww, thanks, Kyra!
Delete:) I love vampire stories! (despite what the literary world says at the moment)
ReplyDeleteI do, too!
DeleteNice twist! Damn Ben, and here I was starting to like him.
ReplyDeleteYou can still like him. ;) Just be warned... he bites. *wink*
DeleteWow, that was good. Vampires are just creepy and sexy all at the same time.
ReplyDeletelove the surprise ending!!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Tara!
DeleteGreat twist, I was not expecting it!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Carolyn. :)
DeleteAwesome and spooky.
ReplyDeleteExcellent! Loving this blog hop, such great stories!
ReplyDeleteAw, thank you!
DeleteHi Jackie
ReplyDeleteScary guy, to bad she isn't a Dental Assistant. No not really. I'm just feeling a little silly today. Nice job.
Nancy
Thanks!
DeleteNever tour a haunted house with a vampire!
ReplyDeleteI don't think she would have if she knew he was a vampire, but she didn't know until it was too late. :)
DeleteGreat stuff. It's the nice one who don't seem so scary that you need to watch out for.
ReplyDeleteVon L Cid
Thanks for reading!
DeleteI loved the Vampiric twist at the end!
ReplyDeleteThank you! I love vampire stories.
DeleteAnd *smack!* those last few lines hit you when you least expect it. ;) Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Nicole!
DeleteWhat a great short piece! You should consider expanding some of these and sending them in to anthologies!
ReplyDeleteAw, you're so sweet! Thank you!
DeleteSpooky! Got to watch out for those vampires!
ReplyDeleteWell I wasn't expecting that ending! Great job :)
ReplyDeleteAh, you got me there! I was thinking it was all nice and sweet, until that ending. Well done, this was great.
ReplyDeleteYeah, I like stories with a twist. Thanks for reading!
DeleteHoly Twist-At-The-End, Batman!!! :-D
ReplyDeleteMina's Resurrection Blogfest!
Hehe. Thanks, Mina!
DeleteAs a kid I was always freaked out by haunted houses, cause I figured it would be the best place to kill someone for real. I mean, who would know, right?
ReplyDeleteThis reminded me of that and totally creeped me out. Nice job!
So true! Thanks for reading!
DeleteWell, that wasn't so bad; until the end. Guess he wanted her veins pumping, lol.
ReplyDelete.....dhole
LOL Cute! Thanks for reading!
DeleteOoh I love this, great twist at the end :)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Laura!
DeleteNow that was unexpected!! I love a good twist :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading!
DeleteI've seen you blog-hop badge and your blog mentioned in a bunch of sites today -- you're famous! I loved your flash fic item, especially the ending. Great post! :-)
ReplyDeleteCool! Thanks for reading!
DeleteAww, this was a wonderful piece! The guy seemed so adorable...right until the end. Maybe he's just turning her, and not killing her? So they can be together forever? (I'm a hopeless romantic)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the blog hop!
Hehe. Thanks!
DeleteI like the twist
ReplyDeleteLove the twist at the end!
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading!
DeleteGreat story!
ReplyDeleteAw! Poor girl! I do love a good vampire story. :)
ReplyDeleteMe, too! Thanks for reading!
DeleteAwesome twist! Just when she thought she was safe. ;)
ReplyDeleteThank you for reading!
DeleteA real vampire in a fake haunted house, now there's something you wouldn't see coming. Nicely done! Thanks for hosting this fest, I had a spooktacular time reading all these wonderfully, spirited shorts! There are few better ways to get into Halloween then some creepy stories. :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much!
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